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Warm-up:  Copy the following list of 1st and 2nd person pronouns.  Then reread your essay draft and circle any place you used any of these words.  You will have to edit to eliminate all these words.

I, me, my, mine, myself, ourselves, our, we, your, your, you’re, yourself

Classwork:  editing workshops - commonly confused words and style (syntax analysis) chart, add 3 TASS patterns

Homework:  FINAL DRAFT of essay due tomorrow - print it or upload it to edmodo