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Warm-up: Fix the faulty pronoun reference in each sentence.

1. All students can secure parking permits from the campus police office; they are open from 8:00 a.m. until 8:00 p.m.

2. The detective removed the bloodstained shawl from the body and then photographed it.

3. We have a staff of experienced technicians that will service your copier within two hours of a service call.

4. The average price for a ticket to the rock concert is $30, and this is not unreasonable for three hours of exciting entertainment.

5. In the newspaper article, it traces the history of voting rights in the District of Columbia.

Classwork:  complete step 5 of revision packet using available rubrics; turn in revision packets; discuss test tips for tomorrow; complete scoring worksheet

Homework:  study for AP test; rest