Friday, September 10, 2010

9/10

Warm-up:  On the back of your rough draft, answer these questions.


1. What are your concerns about your work on this essay so far? What do you still need to do? What are you still unsure of?

2. What do you feel confident about? What have you done well?

3. How finished is this essay, or how rough is it? How much time have you spent on it so far? How much more time do you need? Explain.

 
 
Classwork :  Rough Draft Workshop
-Read the warm-up comments on the back of the essay, and focus on the areas that they are concerned about.


-Did the writer fail to mention any issues that you noticed?

-Is the opening paragraph strong? Does it explain the main message or purpose of the image?

-Is there anything in the essay that needs to be deleted, added, or shortened? Does it all make sense?

Are there any details in the image that they failed to mention?

Did they explain how every detail and strategy contributes to the purpose/message?





Homework: Final Draft and TIPS 2 Due Monday

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